Reread 2

So I’ve finished my proofreading of Deathless draft 2, and I’m pleasantly surprised at what I’ve found. It’s not terrible. In fact, it’s pretty good. That might seem a little underwhelming, but some of you might remember the result of my reread of the first draft. t looked something like this:

I made much fewer annotations this time, so few in fact, that I didn’t feel the need to use my color code (which is also why there’s no picture of it this time). That’s encouraging. Less changes means that Deathless is getting closer to its finished form, and I’m one step closer to deciding what I do with it.

Now it’s time to make these changes and see where that leaves me.

Wish me luck!

-Sal

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